You are the moon

It is romantic?

or am I pathetic?

I think you’re handsome,

but what do I know?

I’m young and I’m dumb

sitting here by the ocean

feeling like a fleck of sand

when you are the dunes.

I am the tide,

you are the moon;

I am nothing without you.


  1. Navin says:

    Quite romantic poem.

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      1. No problem 🙂 check out my blog when you get the chance 😀


  2. Woodsy says:


    Written straight from the tides and textures of the shore… as well as those of the heart.

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  3. Carol Anne says:

    awwww! beautiful!


  4. R.E. Ray says:

    It’s romantic! Never pathetic to show such vulnerability and tenderness, especially in a poem. Another good write, Lauren.

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  5. stepping stones to love, its so good

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