Came back from the dead,
treaded a fine line between
thriving and rotting.
I don’t usually do haikus, but I was writing this while doing warm ups and I liked it, so here it is.
Came back from the dead | Haiku
Came back from the dead,
treaded a fine line between
thriving and rotting.
I don’t usually do haikus, but I was writing this while doing warm ups and I liked it, so here it is.
hey, I'm Lauren. I like writing. This is where I post different things I’m working on. Sometimes poems, sometimes short stories, sometimes general blog posts, and more. View all posts by Lauren
You captured what’s often missed with haiku, the punch in the last line. Good piece!
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Very interesting
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lauren, i love it! Well done girl! ❤
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