Came back from the dead | Haiku

Came back from the dead,

treaded a fine line between

thriving and rotting.

I don’t usually do haikus, but I was writing this while doing warm ups and I liked it, so here it is.

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Published by Lauren

hey, I'm Lauren. I like writing. This is where I post different things I’m working on. Sometimes poems, sometimes short stories, sometimes general blog posts, and more.

4 Comments

  1. R.E. Ray says:
    December 12, 2019 at 11:34 am

    You captured what’s often missed with haiku, the punch in the last line. Good piece!

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    1. Lauren says:
      December 12, 2019 at 11:36 am

      Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂

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  2. proudmammalh says:
    December 15, 2019 at 8:12 pm

    Very interesting

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  3. Carol Anne says:
    December 26, 2019 at 1:57 pm

    lauren, i love it! Well done girl! ❤

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