Came back from the dead | Haiku

Came back from the dead,

treaded a fine line between

thriving and rotting.


I don’t usually do haikus, but I was writing this while doing warm ups and I liked it, so here it is.

4 Comments

  1. R.E. Ray says:

    You captured what’s often missed with haiku, the punch in the last line. Good piece!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lauren says:

      Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂

      Like

  2. proudmammalh says:

    Very interesting

    Like

  3. Carol Anne says:

    lauren, i love it! Well done girl! ❤

    Like

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